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rogue

ANGEL
I wake up in the middle of the night.
Again I feel dark in my heat.
I’m in snare of my mind,
Lookin’ for something I never find.
Alone in gulf of existence
I fight with silence for last chance.

Ref:
Sleeping in a cemetery of views
Among all lies lookin’ for truth.
Razor blade cuts my skin.
I see wan light in my dream,
But guardian angel can’t help me there.
I’m my own prisoner.

They hurt me every time,
Not with blows, but with their lies.
I don’t know I should live,
I’m losing faith in free.
Again I look in this pain deep,
Again dark mind has creped.

Ref:
Sleeping in a cemetery of views
Among all lies lookin’ for truth.
Razor blade cuts my skin.
I see wan light in my dream
But guardian angel can’t help me there.
I’m my own prisoner.

On the answers I can’t wait,
But fit of pain ‘n’ alleviate.
Some particle died in me.
Shouldn’t have you protect me?

Ref:
Sleeping in a cemetery of views
Among all lies lookin’ for truth.
Razor blade cuts my skin.
I see wan light in my dream
But guardian angel can’t help me there.
I’m my own prisoner.

Razor blade cuts my skin,
I see an angel in my dream.

EMPTY SCREAM
I want to be with you,
Do the same what we do.
I know that’s hurt,
So I say just one word.
I’m sorry
Please forgive me. I did all wrong.
I’m sorry.
Why you keep quiet so long?

Ref:
I’m looking, but I can’t see!
I’m listening, but I can’t hear!
I wish to have you here,
But my scream is empty!
I’m feeling, but more faintly!
I’m moving in flat calm.
I’m crawling so slowly,
But I’m dying inside...

We’re together at now,
I’m quietly cryin’.
You’re holding my hand.
I hope our feel is saved.
I love You
I’m not scare anymore.
I need You
Harder like before!

Ref:
I’m looking, but I can’t see!
I’m listening, but I can’t hear!
I wish to have you here,
But my scream is empty!
I’m feeling, but more faintly!
I’m moving in flat calm.
I’m crawling so slowly,
But I’m dying inside...

You’re still keeping so quiet.
I feel more tired.
My eyes of tears are shining.
Why you talk nothing?

Ref:
I’m looking, but I can’t see!
I’m listening, but I can’t hear!
I wish to have you here,
But my scream is empty!
I’m feeling, but more faintly!
I’m moving in flat calm.
I’m crawling so slowly,
But I’m dying inside...

BEZ TYTUŁU... JESZCZE NIE SKOŃCZONE
So, what is that
It shoots you down?
Everyone, baby, just comes around.
So, why they lurk?
And who are you?
Do you know something, everyone want to?

You think you do.
You know your way.
It’s something not everybody can say.
But, what of that,
When you don’t trust?
Throw gateway from your mind you must.

(...) [może coś tu będzie]

I know my way.
And you know yours.
Everyone thinks our life is curse,
But it’s a bless
Like an air in chest.

Ochyio

Soł imoł . Ale jak na piosenke to a) skuteczne b) wzhruszjące c) poprostu ładnie napisane .

Charlotte

Mało oryginalne. Nie urzekło.

Język ojczysty mamy piękny- bo nasz!

nuss

I wake up in the middle of the night.
jak u Akona :hamster_evil:

nie są złe, ale smutne i faktycznie strasznie imoł ; |

Trotzki

Patrzę, acz widzieć nie umiem :<
Nie lubię banału, pardon!

rogue

to jest
"Patrzę, ale nie widzę"

banał banałem a przenośnia to co innego.. nie wszyscy rozumieją o czym pisze.... bo nikt nie wie co sie dzieje w mojej głowie

La voix

Spekulatywna.

Roxy (sam) Sex

piszę lepsze = D joking ; p

a tak na serio - przenośnia przenośnią, ale banalna przenośnia... również używam przenośni, ale nie takich. twoje teksty trochę nudzą.

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